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#1 waz416

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Posted 13 March 2008 - 09:03 PM

Well I liked the riffs .....so decided to make a song.....i think I liek it....i dont know...maybe its the solo or the extended sluggy riff in the middle.....but o well...i hope u guys like it.....kiondda groovy fast paced rock n roll...say even metal....hahaha...!!!!...PEAC EOUT

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Lyrics
Ive never felt so much aggravation
You tear me down, I got no resolution
Break me to pieces, Ill find a way
Ill walk right right up and say What I mean

This hate that you feed, aint what I need
This hurt that you give, I just don't feel

Take me to the place
Show me all its grace
I wanna take you Higher higher
Tear me to the bone
Leave me all alone
I wanna take you higher higher

Your indecision left me all stranded
Your inquisitions had me all wounded

No way out of here
Ive shown you the light in here

EDIT : I did some EQ on the guitars and cut a riff out and added some more leads.....hope its better now...PEAC EOUT

Edited by waz416, 15 March 2008 - 10:16 PM.

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#2 laker0902

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Posted 14 March 2008 - 09:19 AM

The only thing I can think of when I hear "I wanna take you higher" is that Creed song...maybe it's just me, but that song is engrained in my head from it being overplayed on the radio in early 2000.

This is alright, it just never really catches me, it's a bit "blah", no offense, I just think you can do better.

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#3 chasyd

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Posted 14 March 2008 - 09:23 AM

I agree with Sara on this. It does rock don't get me wrong but its just as Sara said "a bit blah", its a song we've heard before if you konw what I mean. If I heard a band playing it in a bar I'd be quite happy to let it play in the background but it wouldn't grab my full attention if that makes sense?

#4 tml

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Posted 14 March 2008 - 01:51 PM

I always like your chords changes from verses to pre-chorus/choruses.

I liked the 'sluggy riff in the middle', as with the solo. That very abrupt ending is cool too.

Cool stuff.

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Posted 15 March 2008 - 11:01 AM

I like that grainy high gain sound on the opening guitars, nicely broadens the spectrum too, it's nicely sludge-ish. And I got to agree with the Tracy on the change from pre-chorus to chorus. I like how the chorus is sung an almost fast-rap-stylee, I prefer this over the grunting you have done here and there. Solid stuff.

#6 waz416

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Posted 15 March 2008 - 10:17 PM

EDIT : I did some EQ on the guitars and cut a riff out and added some more leads.....hope its better now...PEAC EOUT
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#7 spnj

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Posted 16 March 2008 - 03:38 PM

sounded good, my only suggestion is the chorus doesnt' really seem to stand out from the verses. I m not really sure what it is... perhaps the tone... im not a metal guy so I cant claim to know what needs fixing.
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