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#1 knuckles2cloud

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Posted 10 June 2004 - 06:23 PM

this song is about my juniour high , since school just ended, and im headin on to high school, and also about my first Girlfriend in JH, and how she left me, hehe

verse 1 ( clean )
my days of juniour high
i told so many lies
my heart was broke
i thought i would croke
she said i was dumb
then i went numb

bridge ( distortion )

she said i was dumb
i feel so numb
she said i was dumb
i feel so numb

verse 2 ( clean )

that one day i had a rubber band
'cause of it i got canned
ive always been hurt
by the way, courtney killed kurt ( in backround )
but overall in the sun
i had so much fun

bridge ( distortion )

she said i was dumb
i feel so numb
she said i was dumb
i feel so numb

chorus ( distortion, w/ lead after )

i guess it was my fate
to stare into her eyes of hate
then the bell rang
i walked with shame
the last day of school
really wasnt that cool

verse 3 ( clean )

my days of juniour high
i told so many lies
my heart was broke
i thought i would croke
she said i was dumb
then i went numb

bridge ( distortion )

she said i was dumb
i feel so numb
she said i was dumb
i feel so numb

chorus ( distortion )

i guess it was my fate
to stare into her eyes of hate
then the bell rang
i walked with shame
the last day of school
really wasnt that cool


all right, there it is, let me know what ya think blink.gif

#2 Mark Kelly

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Posted 10 June 2004 - 06:45 PM

Im sorry to be the badman smile.gif But i think some of this song is very forced not sure if i understand the meaning either, not entirely.. Its better to write something than write nothing, u can only improve.. Keep writing chief!

#3 Mark Kelly

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Posted 10 June 2004 - 07:16 PM

ok just looked at ur profile, ur 13,14.. I would never have dreamed of writing a song at that age, keep writing and you will be great when you when u get older, sorry for putting a downer on ur song smile.gif

Edited by Mark Kelly, 10 June 2004 - 07:22 PM.


#4 knuckles2cloud

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Posted 10 June 2004 - 07:55 PM

lol, no worries, i know im alot younger than alot of people on this website =) i do have a band and stuff, but just in the making! lol, by the way , my bands name is " faded " ill get a link to our website sometime... ive only got a couple songs, but my band needs some originals, lol biggrin.gif

#5 imadique

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Posted 11 June 2004 - 07:34 AM

i have to agree wth what mark said. The courtney killed kurt line: sounds like you needed something to rhyme with hurt- but it's left field, i'll give you that! cool.gif
keep writing



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