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#2016919 songwriters song of the day

Posted by yyiryyib on 07 September 2005 - 02:08 PM in Songwriting

could u guys put a tab with the song, or at least the chords so i could have a go with some of em



#1993660 With me

Posted by yyiryyib on 27 August 2005 - 04:16 AM in Songwriting

well i wrote it fast-ish, but i never actually write love songs. it just sounds like one to the casual listener. why do it? i dont know, it just kinda came out that way when i wrote it, its funny to see how people take it, if they dismiss it as a generic love song without listening to the words and thinking about it. or if they actually think about and realise its about something else

heh. mind games!



#1992994 With me

Posted by yyiryyib on 26 August 2005 - 04:23 PM in Songwriting

ohhhh hows about darling?



#1992761 Find me a Tree

Posted by yyiryyib on 26 August 2005 - 02:33 PM in Songwriting

well im not really a lyrics person, put up a track and i'll tell you, judging on lyrics alone is like judging art on the artsit before you have seen it. you dont get the full thing.

i mean chilli peppers "cant stop" is a load of gibberish, but a good song



#1992695 With me

Posted by yyiryyib on 26 August 2005 - 02:08 PM in Songwriting

lol thanks, any ideas instead of baby? its only there cos i had nothing better to use and i wanted to go to bed



#1992600 With me

Posted by yyiryyib on 26 August 2005 - 01:39 PM in Songwriting

ok, some notes

1) baby was used cos i have no significant other so throw any name u want in
2) i dont know any blues stuff i just kinda wrote it off the cuff so no worries there no realt thought went into it
3) nice someone looked into the lyrics, most people just think oh rite love song when actually its a song about breaking up with a girl and her being upset so well done lostworriorm its not a ballad its just ment to sound that way to the casual listener
4) the head on shoulder, eyelashes on cheak doesnt work if u think about unless she turns her head, so i dont think about it tongue.gif

thanks for the comments there are some slight rewrites on the song


im no good at love songs
All i do is sing the blues
And im no good with feelings
only ones i had, i had for you

So why bother with all this caring
You'll only see it through
So why bother with all your crying
your whole world falls in on you

when your with me
your with me

Dry your eyes my baby, (or) Dry your eyes sweet <insert name here>
I'd give the sky to see you smile
Its not as if your life is over
you heart just stopped for a while

Your head on my shoulder
I feel your warm tears on my arm
your eyelashes smudged on my cheek
baby you'll come to no harm
when your with me
your with me
your with me
With me



#1989636 With me

Posted by yyiryyib on 25 August 2005 - 10:18 AM in Songwriting

For those who play guitar chords are G - Cadd9, just pick the top 5 strings up and down, (thats it) Oh and Capo on the 3rd fret!

Lyrics

im no good at love songs
All i do is sing the blues
And im no good with feelings
only ones i had, i had for you

So why bother with caring
You'll only see it through
So why bother with crying
your whole world falls in on you
on you,
on you

Dry your eyes my baby,
Id give the sky to see you smile
its not as if your life is over
you heart just stopped for a while

Your head on my shoulder
your warm tears on my arm
your eye lashes on my cheek
baby you'll come to no harm
when your with me
your with me
your with me
With me

End on a strum of G

To hear go here
http://www.soundclic...ecarr_music.htm

Please post comments on the song, tell me what u think



#1937370 Strumming and rhythm

Posted by yyiryyib on 01 August 2005 - 03:05 PM in Acoustic Guitar Discussion

my thumb has a nice callus on the side cos i use it so much, lol the sounds is much more rounded when u use your fingers and thumb



#1937364 Capos

Posted by yyiryyib on 01 August 2005 - 03:02 PM in Acoustic Guitar Discussion

i used to make one out of a pencil and elastic band!



#1916235 Home Again Tonight

Posted by yyiryyib on 23 July 2005 - 07:18 AM in Songwriting

i have to agree this isnt a christian song



#1916225 im sorry

Posted by yyiryyib on 23 July 2005 - 07:13 AM in Songwriting

CODE
G       Cadd9
I知 sorry to say it happened
G                          Cadd9
I知 sorry to say it did
G            Cadd9
Id turn back the clock if I could
     Dsus4   Cadd9
On You


G                         Cadd9
I知 sorry to say I said it
G                            Cadd9
But I didn稚 think I could
G                                  Cadd9
I don稚 want to look at your eyes
      Dsus4   Cadd9                     G
Anymore,               cos their too sad

Cadd9         G
     Far too, Sad


Cadd9    G


G                        Cadd9
I知 sorry I never kissed you
G                          Cadd9
I知 sorry about we cried
G                      Cadd9
I didn't think I'd miss you
G                       Cadd9
I think about that time
      Dsus4  Cadd9        G
But now                 It alright

It's alright


Things come to fruitition
We all leave the past behind
So I致e got to forget you
Cos you play on my mind
But now its alright

in her own right
she's sorry
im sorry
so Sorry


its a few little changes to the song, i couldnt be bothered to finsih the tab, to listen to the old version to get an idea of how its played go here



#1914514 Capos

Posted by yyiryyib on 22 July 2005 - 11:09 AM in Acoustic Guitar Discussion

i have a capo and i love it



#1910892 Who should I listen to?

Posted by yyiryyib on 21 July 2005 - 06:21 AM in Songwriting

u could listen to my songs, im after feedback

http://www.soundclic...ecarr_music.htm



#1908776 whats this chord?

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 02:13 PM in Guitar Q & A

my chord finder says Amadd9



#1908672 i dunno where to start?

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 01:48 PM in Songwriting

oh yea, cheer up a bit and stop puttin yourself down, your makin me depressed, everyone gets writers block



#1908668 i dunno where to start?

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 01:47 PM in Songwriting

1

2

3

go

no idealy start with chords thats what i do, then just strum them and improv till something sounds right, it takes me ages to find the chords but once i have i write my songs in an hour or 2



#1908583 "Jaded" and "im sorry"

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 01:24 PM in Songwriting

yea i'll keep playin with them



#1907863 "Jaded" and "im sorry"

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 07:43 AM in Songwriting

there ive fixed the tab at the top as well.

im a singer first and a guitar player 2nd, ive only been playing about 3 months so i dont really have the skills yet to go off on solo's.

yay someone likes them tho!



#1907842 "Jaded" and "im sorry"

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 07:24 AM in Songwriting

they are up!



#1907841 If Tomorrow Never Came *rate*

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 07:22 AM in Songwriting

nice song, but u have alot of syllables in your phrases, as im a singer 1st and a guitarist 2nd, maybe if u took a few words out and shortened the lines down it would flow a bit better



#1907833 "Jaded" and "im sorry"

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 07:12 AM in Songwriting

ahhhhhh thats soooooo annoying



#1907818 "Jaded" and "im sorry"

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 06:56 AM in Songwriting

go here both songs are there

my songs



#1907801 "Jaded" and "im sorry"

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 06:33 AM in Songwriting

yea if u know a good host that would help, ive taken the mp3 links down cos i dont know where to host them



#1907791 "Jaded" and "im sorry"

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 06:26 AM in Songwriting

heres the second called "im sorry" its much simpler but i like it, tell me when u think

CODE
G       Cadd9
I知 sorry to say it happened
G                          Cadd9
I知 sorry to say it did
G            Cadd9
Id turn back the clock if I could
     Dsus4   Cadd9
On You


G                         Cadd9
I知 sorry to say I said it
G                            Cadd9
But I didn稚 think I could
G                                  Cadd9
I don稚 want to look at your eyes
      Dsus4   Cadd9                     G
Anymore,               cos their too sad

G - Cadd9 (play twice)


      G       Cadd9
I知 sorry
      G        Cadd9
I知 sorry


G                         Cadd9
I知 sorry I never kissed you
G                             Cadd9
I知 sorry about we cried
G                            Cadd9
I知 sorry of how I miss you
G                             Cadd9
I知 sorry about that time
      Dsus4  Cadd9        G
But now                 It alright


I知 sorry

Your sorry


Things come to fruitition

We all leave the past behind

So I致e got to forget you

Cos you play on my mind

I知 sorry

So sorry

Sorry


i couldnt be bothered to write out the tab to the last verse if u can the play the first bit the rest is the same

listen here



#1907789 "Jaded" and "im sorry"

Posted by yyiryyib on 20 July 2005 - 06:24 AM in Songwriting

ok the first one is called jaded

CODE
Intro

-----2---------2--------2--------2----------
---3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3--------
-2--------2---------0-------0---------------    X2
----------------------------------------------
----------------------------------------------
----------------------------------------------

-----2---------2--------2--------2----------2---------2--------2--------2---------------
---3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3-----3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3--------------
-2--------2---------0-------0---------2--------2---------0-------0----------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
What I feel        All I feel

-----2---------2--------2--------2----------2---------2--------2--------2---------------
---3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3-----3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3--------------
-2--------2---------0-------0---------2--------2---------0-------0----------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
What I need     Is You

-----2---------2--------2--------2----------2---------2--------2--------2---------------
---3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3-----3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3--------------
-2--------2---------0-------0---------2--------2---------0-------0----------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
What I breath           What I see

-----2---------2--------2--------2----------2---------2--------2--------2---------------
---3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3-----3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3--------------
-2--------2---------0-------0---------2--------2---------0-------0----------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Is all you mean        To me
                                                                                             Dadd4??   A7sus4
D Dadd4 (play twice)                                                                      ----3---     ----3---
                                                                                            ----2---     ----3---
D       G         Em7   A7sus4                                                              ----0---     ----0---
Suffocating, drowning maybe, Feeling Faded, You left me jaded                               ----0---     ----2---
A7sus4                                                                                      ----x---     ----0---
Baby and,                                                                                   ----x---     ----x---
D      G  Em7     A7sus4
Now    What am I, Supposed to do, Baby and
D      G  Em7      A7sus4    D Dadd4 (play D - Dadd4 twice)
Now      Where am I, Supposed to go without you







D     G                  Em7    A7sus4
Torn apart, Flung away, Feeling lost, please don稚 stay
A7sus4
Baby and,
D      G             Em7                  A7sus4
Now      I can稚 look at you, what you put me through, baby and
D      G              Em7   A7sus4
Now     You致e gone away, sky gone grey

D        G            Em7            A7sus4         D Dadd4 (play D - Dadd4 twice)
I cant, live without you, id give up forever just to kiss you again

D      G                   Em7       A7sus4
Devastated, self paraded, endless tears, no more fears,
A7sus4
Baby and,
D      G   Em7                     A7sus4
Now       Would you steal, the way I feel, baby and
D      G        Em7          A7sus4                      D Dadd4 (play D Dadd4 twice)
Now     I知 rooted and I cant move, without you

            D
 -----2---------2--------2--------2----------2---------2--------2--------2------2---------2--------2--------2------2-
----3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3-----3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3---3---3----3----3---3---3---3---3----3-----3-
 -2--------2---------0-------0---------2--------2---------0-------0---------2--------2---------0-------0-----------2-
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------0-
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------x-
 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------x-
        Lets Run away     Forget today


End on D (last 4 strings slow single strum, let it ring)


listen here, sorry about the vocals the guitar it was only a quick recording songs





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