Okay, I'm bored enough, so I'll listen to them all! The end of home
A lot of hiss, but I'll listen past it. I actually like your voice, don't be so humble, it's good. It reminds me of... something... somethings 80s... Cocteau Twins ? Dunno, but it's soothing on this song. I haven't got a clue what you're actually saying, though. Until I saw the lyrics sheet, that is. Mental cruelty
I can see this song working in the minimalist setting as it is in now, maybe with piano instead of a guitar. Just chords and a vocal line, I think. The vocals are a bit sketchy at times, but like you mentioned, you meant for someone else to sing them. Get the right person and this should work fine.
Kind of like a Kate Bush ballad. Nervous breakdown
Hm, I don't know what is is, but I don't really feel anything with this song. It doesn't really strike me, that's all.Look away
I like the chord bridging the verse into the chorus. I read the accompanying story behind the lyrics and I think you pulled it off nicely, i.e.: using 'emo-lyrics' without sounding overly pompous or miserable. Check the songwriting forum on these boards to get proper reviews of your lyrics, I'm not really qualified on giving feedback on those.
Edited by igorski, 09 March 2005 - 06:23 AM.