Jump to content


Member Since 08 Jun 2002
Offline Last Active Apr 10 2013 12:55 PM

Posts I've Made

In Topic: new song: Idiot

03 June 2008 - 07:01 AM

I don't like the use of 'ain't' - just sounds like you're trying a bit too hard. Haven't listened to the soundbite, my laptop is a bit messed up at the moment.
My only other piece of advice would be to mix up the rhyme scheme a bit - you don't want to overuse the ABCB rhyme too quickly.
Your second last stanza is very well controlled, both in meter and ideas, definately the high part of the song.

In Topic: Hi songwriting!

03 June 2008 - 06:52 AM

Congrats matey. Looks like a lot's changed since I've been away!

Please consider donating to GuitarZone.com.
With more and more people using ad blocking add-ons for browsers, ad revenue has plummeted.
If you can spare even US$5 it would mean a lot to help pay for GZ's monthly server bill.
Thank you to all. Cheers! --Rob

Method #1: PayPal

Click 'Donate' above
to donate with any
major credit card or
existing PayPal funds.

E-mail on record with PayPal
[ ]

Method #2: Bitcoin

Option A )  Scan Bitcoin QR Code

Scan above box with mobile phone, or click...

Option B )  Copy and Paste Bitcoin Address


Copy above address and paste into Bitcoin app...

Learn more about Bitcoin...