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Offline Last Active Aug 09 2004 12:10 AM

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Treat me so

14 June 2004 - 04:21 PM

Point your soft nose skywards
And gaze straight into my eyes
As you turn away
My pupils are quick to fade

I watch when you sleep
I see it all
This is the only way you'll hear me
So i'll say it now
Four lettered words are straight off the tongue
So i'd rather keep shut than watch my love slowly burn


Hey all, just came to songwriting and wrote this on the go to mark my presence, enjoy if you can....its kinda tricky to understand i think anyways...comments always welcome...

Darren x

Demanding angels

04 June 2004 - 07:05 PM

This is a two part poem that is sloppy, dead and un-finished however i hope to structure it in the morning and add in another section, the inspiration behind this is a mix of my love for Incubus and the fact i came up with the line Staring in the faces of a thousand screaming angels. This might be a help to some songwriters who have just begun writing, who knows how? Ask F. Feedback appreciated as always, enjoy.

Demanding angels

With curtains drawn
I finish this book
A novel pawned
A life took
So descend from me 'o' dying angel
Head skywards into the arms of Gabriel

And so i stand
Staring in the faces of a thousand screaming angels
And they demand
I follow the minor traces
Between hell and where i am
And as i do i soon become a better man


30 May 2004 - 07:45 AM

A man of honour
A man of pride
A man never afraid to stand
A man that'll never hide
A man that showed me the way
The man that made me stay

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25 May 2004 - 02:44 PM

I wrote this during maths today instead of doing my work. I firstly made a beat then rapped this, the middle part is the rap and the first part is sang. Sue me....


Sit on your bed
Battered and un-fed
Wit nothing but hope and a guitar
Hope that one day soon you'll become a shining star

Hope, laughter, abuse and tears
Are about to explode lyrically from the pain of these years
Open the door and let me in
Shut the fuck up mutha fuck before i break your chin
I said open the fucking door my patience is running thin
I'm about to break this door down
And your scream will be the last sound
To ring through these walls
As i softly slip away and run through these halls

Where am I now?
Oh where am I now?
Not a star but a murderer
Not gone far because she made me hurt her....

Future, present, past

22 May 2004 - 05:17 PM

Out of utter boredness i produced this, doesn't really say much to me as the writer, just wondering what you lot though....comments please smile.gif

Future, Present, Past

Strip the walls and you're left with me
And so i stand naked yet proud
Cut up and jaded without a sound
So leave me here to pick up the peices
I shed a tear as you reach homeward bound

Ten months on and i'm just as bare
Faces i've seen no longer stare
Its all became natural and it cuts me to say
That i still love you anyway

A decade has past
Spoiled in self pitty i finally stand
To spill my last tears in a rock band....

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