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In Topic: please help me with my song

24 January 2006 - 04:45 PM

QUOTE (mcgrail @ Jan 24 2006, 04:38 PM)
i think that this is a decent song, and personally i find the chorus the best bit, if your mate doesnt understand it i think he has no ndepth to his thinking what so ever, if you ask me open your eyes and try to find me is saying its obvious who i am, the mirrors line is saying she hides herslef under so many faces, personalities, masks, how ever you want to describe it.

Songs like this make alot more sense when your writing them, is it personal at all? because it had that feel, i think the lyric is an honest one, if your not in this situation, this is how you would be if you were. I think your friends wrong, but i feel the verses have more to offer, theres nice imagry in the chorus, try to make the verses more emotional, find what you really feel, make it more poetic and i think youll have a good song here.

well to be honest they say "write what you know" i know how it feels tobe heart broken and stuff. but i write so much on it. in a way hes right i need to stop... be he says "this isnt you, when i'm around you your always happy, write about your crazy girlfriend. and coffee shops you play at ect" which is right.

this song is personal to me. and to be honest i wrote the verses first, and the chorus came natural. and when he said it didnt make sense. i looked to hard into it.
and what you said was right.

i have a song sample of it. and in my opinion it sounds really good. this was my first song i've made that wasnt acoustic. that had a rock feel to it.

In Topic: do i need a perment to play at a park?

15 December 2005 - 12:05 PM

Okay great to hear. there hardly is anybody that goes to that park. so it would be me, my friend, and maybe a few people playing basketball..

my friend called the recreational center that owns the park or whatever and they said that it would be illigal... i guess we should of just went there to try it out then get warned..

In Topic: do i need a perment to play at a park?

15 December 2005 - 11:58 AM

QUOTE (littleclapton @ Dec 15 2005, 11:56 AM)
QUOTE (Mike_Perez @ Dec 15 2005, 02:53 PM)
so i just got this 800 dollar pa (The matrix ver 2, 700 watts) and well, i would like to try it out. its at my friends hosue because curently there is no way to play it at my house.
anyway there is a park of walkign distance next to his house. i was wondering if it would be illigal if we  rolled the pa (it has wheels) over to the park, went into a grassy area and played it. we have a logn extention cable and i'm sure we ca find a lampost that has an electrical output..

so the question is. could we go and play the pa at a park and not get in trouble?
like if it was at a decent volume... i mean if it was dramasticly loud i can see it as a problem.. but what do you guys think?

would i need a permit or something?

Are you in the US? If so, there should not be a problem, there is really only one way to find out. Roll it over there and rock out until the man comes down on you. The worst thing that can happen is that they tell you that you can't play there. I believe that you would only need a permit if you were charging people to attend. You should be fine.

yes i live in san diego, well i wouldnt want there to be any 'complaints against me'... or get in any trouble.. because of the noise..

In Topic: Brand new song

12 November 2005 - 12:33 PM

that sounds really good. what chords are you using?

In Topic: New Song (Sample please review)

22 October 2005 - 02:16 AM

QUOTE (the cash @ Oct 22 2005, 01:45 AM)


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