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Emotion in songs?

17 June 2006 - 08:35 PM

When ever I write a song I can't ever get the emotion I want. Like I listen to rock/metal like Motley Crue, Korn, Nickleback, Metallica, Guns 'N Roses, and many more. But when I write I can't get the harder sounding lyrics to fit. Though when I sing (in the shower blush.gif .....) I can and when I play my guitar. Anyone got some tips?


ps. As if you didn't figure out I am looking for a harder type of music.

Metal Heads

10 May 2006 - 12:38 PM

Just a song I wrote down at school. I am not sure if I should make it longer or about the last stanza. All critiques are welcome. Should I have a refrain?

Teacher don't get all soft with me
Cuz I am just a metal head
Waiting to leave this place
That you call school
To go practice with the band

I just wanna jam
gonna hit the road
And play at some good old bars
Get some big shows
While we just rock our hearts out

We will hit the strip club
A time or two
Get some good parties goin on
When we got nothin to do

We play our music
To our own good tunes
Write our own songs
From dusk til dawn
And we are the biggest band
That you will ever see!

They say that we play too loud
But we ain't gonna play
Any of those wussy songs
Everytime we play we end up
Breakin everything on the stage

Method of Mayhem

06 May 2006 - 05:54 PM

I can't seem to find a site that has tabs for Method of Mayhem. I would also like to have "Proposition F**k you" Thanks in advance.

quick question

06 May 2006 - 05:37 PM

This is probably a stupid question but I am assuming that the Fret numbers go left to right. Am I assuming right?

Broken Dreams (working title)

04 May 2006 - 05:12 PM

Just want some critiques. You can be as harsh you want just be honest. I edited "(Untitled)" and this is what I got. It is like it was never that song. Don't know if i need a refrain for it or not. and not sure how the ending is.

I hope you're happy
For what you did
All those people you killed
And families you left crying
When you go
You are gonna have to face the devil

What got into you?
You used to be so cool
We'd always hang out
But then one day
Everything changed
That day you doubled
The tombstones in the graveyard
Right near my house

You really need to pay
For all those deaths
There were so many
That I couldn't count them all

But I bet if we could go back
I know you would change it all
And be that guy
I always knew you were

We would jam out in my garage
Just like old times
When our dreams were
Playing all over the world
And going platinum was all you talked about

Those dreams were almost here
And it seemed we would reach them
But then that day you went crazy
For some odd reason I couldn't figure out

When I read your sentence
I cried all night
Knowin that we couldn't go big
And I would lose a dear friend of mine

You crushed so many dreams
Of mine and others
It seemed you didn't think
That day when you caused so much harm
Now good bye to you

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